I think you need to add more about how you have portrared women as bad and how this goes against the traditional way women are represented in the media. You could talk about how the drugs are on her side of thr room and how she uses a gun as well. I would also talk about how you dressed (and did not dress) the female. You also talked a bit about how you observed men behaving but then did not go on to say how you applied this to your work. I think you could also talk more about the way you have represented men - he is not the typical strong silent type.
I think you need to add more about how you have portrared women as bad and how this goes against the traditional way women are represented in the media. You could talk about how the drugs are on her side of thr room and how she uses a gun as well. I would also talk about how you dressed (and did not dress) the female. You also talked a bit about how you observed men behaving but then did not go on to say how you applied this to your work. I think you could also talk more about the way you have represented men - he is not the typical strong silent type.
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