Friday 23 November 2012

Film noir edit



Here is the first draft of our film in film noir. Enjoy and please feel free to leave a comment! :D

3 comments:

  1. I prefer this one to the sepia one. I really like the lips effect and thinks its clever, however it would be more effective with a darker red. I really like Aiden's acting too :)

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    1. Cheers for the comment Mark, we all decided that we prefer this edit as well so we're trying to work out all the little kinks in it at the moment. We can use a darker red for the lips unfortunately as in the editing, it picks out the exact colour, and not a colour of our choice. However, thinking about that now there must be some kind of tool to help us change the tone of the colour, so I'll have a play. Thanks again! :)

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  2. Looking good so far everyone. A couple of suggestions:
    I think that you should fade the music out after the rewind or add in a crescendo.
    You need to add in some 'wild sound' to when the phone is ringing as it sounds strange whne he answers and we do hear a lot of wild sound.
    I think the phone rings for too long esp as it seems to have no effect on the people - either cut it down a bit or add in a shot or two of the couple reacting to the sound

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